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Humiliated by needs, with a miserable past, she is trying to show that she is sick, passing through a painful cough a painful cough. The rough hands that have fed during the years so many mouths are now begging to the European Union to be able to feed her sons. Shown indifference by her own compatriots, she lives out of the mercy of tourists. The country’s
heart cries out that is ill , she urgently needs surgery on the contrary she can die anytime. The warmth of the heart of the country still gently caresses us and gives comfort to the pain of millions of mislead sons worldwide, lacking affection on the soil of other countries. Sick with corruption, she is being mocked at by second hand pamphleteers who stopped to believe in its recovery. Abandoned in its hard times she has no more tears left to mourn her past, which has treated her cruelly, to mourn as harsh as her present. The heavy industry of the country has been destroyed and with it the digestive system of the mother country, economy has perished and hope died. The country is bleeding, hit by the unconsciousness of those indifferent, of those who are hurt by the moods of the leaders. She is thirsty for knowledge; she desires to breed her sons in the spirit of European Culture, at high universities. Fear and unsafe environment have transformed themselves into infectious diseases of our times. I think that there should be “she is sick, passing through a painful cough” instead of “sick through”; also “heart cries out that is ill” instead of “cries out she is ill”; “to mourn as harsh as her present” instead of “as harsh her present”.
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